Storm that rumbles loud
Waves that fall on rocks beneath
Tears that stain the sand
Blue clouds that keep on coming
To break and shatter my dreams
Antoinette LeRoux © 2016
Images courtesy of Google Images
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Storm that rumbles loud
Waves that fall on rocks beneath
Tears that stain the sand
Blue clouds that keep on coming
To break and shatter my dreams
Antoinette LeRoux © 2016
Images courtesy of Google Images
This poem is short but very powerful. I love the feeling evoked by Tears that stain the sand…I love this alliteration. Beautiful!
Congratulations of completing the Poetry Marathon/ Half Marathon.
Thank you so much! 🙂
I, too, love the image of “tears that stain the sand.” Good work!
Thank you! 🙂
Very powerful
Thank you! 🙂