Hour 7- inside out Posted on August 5, 2017 3:10pm EDT by shrikaanth teeth chattering I wring the day out of my clothes only an hour to walk all the way from aye to nay
OMG I love this and love how short you kept it. Why did I try to work in all the words I wrote? Reply
I missed the first line the first time I read this. Boy, does that make a difference. A whole different feel with that first line! Reply
Even not quite understanding the “only an hour to walk all the way from aye to nay”, the entire feel of the poem resonates in a provocative manner for me and I am left thinking and feeling something substantial… yes! Reply
OMG I love this and love how short you kept it. Why did I try to work in all the words I wrote?
Thanks Alexis- your appreciation means a lot to me
I missed the first line the first time I read this. Boy, does that make a difference. A whole different feel with that first line!
Thanks Donna
Even not quite understanding the “only an hour to walk all the way from aye to nay”, the entire feel of the poem resonates in a provocative manner for me and I am left thinking and feeling something substantial… yes!
I am grinning from ear to ear- thanks again