Turbulent yet calming
the way the water flows
so effortlessly down the stream
giving life to all who dwell.
Offering peace to those who
share in its view-
a true warrior;
a beast.
So lovely,
serene-
yet if necessary,
bold enough
to swallow you whole.
I really liked this poem. I liked the last line. It was a very strong line to end on. The beginning is in awe and then there’s a warning of what dangers can be in the water.
Thank you so much 🙂
Foreshadowing lives in your first lines: “Turbulent yet calming / the way the water flows”
The peaceful, serene waters that ripple and flow also holds danger if one is not looking for the turns.
“Offering peace to those who
share in its view-”
Did you intend the double meaning? Did you intend the warning that life peace was only for those who’re agreeable? Or am I reading too much between the lines of how easily something so lovely and giving can turn on us if necessary.
My view was how one feels when overlooking ad a bystander…however your take on it is fascinating!! I love it!! Thanks so much for your comments 🙂