When my shadow broke from me, cast out, misshapen, I prayed for a mold to make me right, placed faith in an average that could dull such extremes, a chameleon’s tone concealing everything unique. There was a moment in the car when we were driving down to the lake, you read poetry aloud from a book I kept in the console, I think we found it then, it touched us for an instant as we engaged in a place we never reached before. It wasn’t normal, but perhaps was the idea of how I thought normal might feel.
Wow. Love this. The feeling of not “fitting in” — “I prayed for a mold to make me right” and the moment of connection in the car. This poem really resonates with me and it is very vivid. Nice work!