The house in Tennessee
Roof concave, near surrender
Brush and trees, dirt and bees
New roof built and hope extended
Real struggle revealed
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
The house in Tennessee
Roof concave, near surrender
Brush and trees, dirt and bees
New roof built and hope extended
Real struggle revealed
Hi –
I just came upon this poem of yours from Hour 5.
The image of “roof concave, near surrender” – jumped out at me with a lot of strong imagery.
And, your final line “real struggle revealed” – indicated there is more to this story . . . .