#15: Redneck Asshole
Curious mind
Untamed hair
Smelly breathe
Caveman beard
Red neck
Tanned arms
Caring heart
Faded clothes
Gentle prick
Deadly calves
Swollen feet
Steel toes
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
#15: Redneck Asshole
Curious mind
Untamed hair
Smelly breathe
Caveman beard
Red neck
Tanned arms
Caring heart
Faded clothes
Gentle prick
Deadly calves
Swollen feet
Steel toes
Yup. I know this guy. Nice selection of details both concrete and abstract. I love the “Deadly calves.” That one made me smile. Good strong end on “Steel toes.” Hellyeah!
I’m glad you enjoyed the “deadly calves”. I wished steel toes had more ring but at least it rings true LOL