A million sparkling lights
I am one of them
dancing to the tune
singing off the tune
and just existing
it’s okay, isn’t it
we don’t need a
plan to live.
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
A million sparkling lights
I am one of them
dancing to the tune
singing off the tune
and just existing
it’s okay, isn’t it
we don’t need a
plan to live.
This is such a lovely ode to a very solid philosophy of life. I enjoyed it very much! Thank you for the treat!
I love this poem. “dancing to the tune/singing off the tune”
“We dont need a/ plan to live” Perfect, and so rhythmic!
Thank you! ^^
Wonderful message! 🙂
so beautiful <3
dancing to the tune
singing off the tune
it’s okay, isn’t it, we don’t need a, plan to live.
A poet may say this but all those day organizers would disagree. That’s how they make their money! I think this poem is lovely and speaks the poet’s truth and the truth for many — life can be lived successfully without a plan. There are enough others in our lives who have plans for us and that may be a challenge. But, it’s also another poem. Nicely done.
Agreed.. but what I wanted to say was that we do need plans to survive.. but to live.. life is what happens between plans. So while plans are important, we shouldn’t forget to stop once in a while to just breathe, take in everything around us before we start running again on the endless road of survival.
Thank you for reading ^^
So true, we don’t need a plan to live. Excellent!