When I look at void
It looks back at me..
— No, that’s actually abyss
Oh right!
When I look into abyss
It looks back at me
Then I get tired
So I shout into it
— Um… that’s the void
What’s the void?
— the one you shout into
Oh..
I shout into the void
— why are you shouting into the void?
Because you said I can’t shout into the abyss.
— Yes, but why shout at all? That’s not very nice.
But then how would I express myself?
— Can’t you just whisper gently?
…. Okay….
I stare into the abyss
— Staring is rude
Ugh! fine!
I gaze into the abyss
As it gazes into me
Then I whisper to the void
And it listens
Silently.
Such a neat poem! The dialogue within it has a cool effect and then the lovely piece at the end! Great work!