twenty-one: (untitled senryu) Posted on September 3, 2023 5:09am EDT by Billy (untitled) The monster under the bed has bigger issues than your delusions
I don’t know what to make of my interpretation of this poem just yet, but I felt a nice punch. Way to go poet! Reply
We all think the monster is hiding, coming for us; what if the monster is hiding from us? Or everything else? 🙂
I don’t know what to make of my interpretation of this poem just yet, but I felt a nice punch. Way to go poet!
We all think the monster is hiding, coming for us; what if the monster is hiding from us? Or everything else?
🙂
Very effective, little words saying a lot. Gets me more interested in senryu.
This made me laugh 🙂