I knew it was coming.
Everyone did.
Fluttering leaves showed the way.
Flowers bloomed in place.
The moon cycled.
Nevermore blessed.
I needed to see it through.
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
I knew it was coming.
Everyone did.
Fluttering leaves showed the way.
Flowers bloomed in place.
The moon cycled.
Nevermore blessed.
I needed to see it through.
You poem has so many cool lines that evoke emotion and leaves room for interpretation.
“I knew it was coming” leave me with a sense of foreboding.
“Flowers bloomed in place” — gives me the sense that we are standing still, and captures how I think we all felt during Covid.
“I needed to see it through” — left me feeling hopefully.