Squinting, holding the grease lamp low.
Squeezing through the gash in the cliff
Pushing into Cave’s tight tunnel.
Adjusting to the light in the darkness
Squinting, holding the grease lamp low
Finding bones of cave bears littering the floor.
Touching claw marks on the walls.
Adding hand prints and paintings to the art
Squinting, holding the grease lamp low.
The use of the verbs adds a real flow to the poem. A unique and interesting interpretation of paintings. I enjoyed reading it!
Thank you! This is one I’ll come back to.