Green
Grey, brown
Competing
Colours of life
Sprawl across the map in patchwork patterns.
Blocks of brick flats stand almost back-to-back
But still a patch
Of wild ground
Is found
Here,
There,
Spaces
In between
The managed land
A sudden spark of wilderness breaks forth.
Form: Tetractys
Prompt: Write about nature in a city
The visual aspect of this is totally awesome! I think that the composition of the words themselves however make it a little too choppy to read in my mind. Maybe don’t change any of the words, but kind of mess around with the grammar of the text itself? Maybe taking out the capital letters of each line might help too!