For a second lets go offline
And observe the slight wrinkle on our granny’s face for awarded growing another year older
For a second lets go offline
And observe the anexiety on our dad’s face who want his children to be safe
For a second lets go offline
And see the panic on our mothers face who dont want us to go away from her
For a second lets go offline
And see the four pawed love of our lives wagging his tale as he sees us
For just a second lets go offline
Excellent idea and execution. I love litanies and repetitions in poems. I can see you expanding this into a much longer work that I know I’d be excited to read.
Thanx a lot…will definately share it when i expand it further 🙂