Blackberry Picking in Kentucky
Ashy legs dangled
from my grandfather’s weather-beaten flatbed,
wooden boards blanched from too many seasons of tobacco, potatoes, and corn.
A harvest of cousins, aunts, and uncles piled on with all manner of rinsed bucket
as my grandfather slowly dragged us into the woods to find wild blackberry bushes.
It was the hard red berries that gave the bushes with bruise-colored clusters away.
We — sticky with sweat
warned to watch for thorns
and snakes —
reached into the thicket to the promised obsidian clumps.
The flesh yielded beneath our fingertips as we
plucked and plopped the bouncy fruit into
pails.
It wasn’t a race because there were so many berries among the thorns,
and for the children
Time meant nothing.
Our voices joined the birds and frogs as we
blew on and ate a few of the more irresistible drupelets
pressing the balls of the fruit to the roof of our mouths until they were
flooded with juice sweet and tart like memories.
When all the buckets were heavy laden with fruit,
we meandered home.
With fingers stained the color of sacrifice,
We offered the buckets to my grandmother
to be made into a plethora of dark and delicious things.
Such vivid imagery! The reader is right there with you! So many wonderful lines –
a harvest of cousins….
juices sweet and tart like memories
fingers stained the color of sacrifice
just to name a few.
Really enjoyed this poem!
One of my fav marathon poems so far –delicious! Your emjambments are so effective with duality and breath, and metaphoric language. I was there, picking berries, looking at my stained hands… the color of sacrifice. Love it! (Read if you want a suggestion: perhaps consider line 8 up from the bottom as pails.) Kudos!