I changed my drink
my heart seemed to sink
from tea to coffee, it made
me think-
would it help to ease the pain
to make me well again?
to bring good cheer to
the spirit and clear all
the strain of suffering-?
I changed my drink.
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
I changed my drink
my heart seemed to sink
from tea to coffee, it made
me think-
would it help to ease the pain
to make me well again?
to bring good cheer to
the spirit and clear all
the strain of suffering-?
I changed my drink.
I like how this is a subtle way to show how we try to change little things in our life to effect large changes. I also like how the last line echoes the first line.