I’ll never forget the night
the night I begged you to stay
the night I tried to convince you that we were worth staying for
that we were better than any drug you could consume
I laid myself down on the floor, on my knees
at your mercy and pleaded with you to be with us
That night in February you looked in my eyes
No
you said, in flattest tone
getting up you walked out and you left me,
you left us
and my shattered heart all over the floor
gutsy, raw, honest telling of a huge moment.
Fabulous emotion
to my taste, it was not the usual love poem of a shattered heart.This is a life poem, a survival poem. more than heart shattering.
I mean i like that the poem is a moment when the relationship and both people were destroyed, murdered