Tongue tied
Finger cramped
Brain dead
Let me count all the ways I can forget what you said
Toe twisted
Lung frozen
Eye burned
I won’t help any more with your petty concerns
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Tongue tied
Finger cramped
Brain dead
Let me count all the ways I can forget what you said
Toe twisted
Lung frozen
Eye burned
I won’t help any more with your petty concerns
I like the strong voice in this poem, Jasper, and your use of spare but vivid contrasts — reasons you can and can’t forget.
Good work!