Your bare chest ripples beneath my cheek
as creases sprout beside your eyes
and my phone vibrates with missed calls
but I don’t want to hear anything else
except the way the air crackles when
you take your next breath and how
the birdsongs fade beneath the roar
of your carbonated joy
❤️
Short, sweet and fresh. Has me wondering what “carbonated joy” looks like tho 🤔🤗
Yeah… and just the title is quite heartwarming. 👌
I can hear the room fill with laughter while the two of you cuddle and enjoy each other’s company. The rest of the world can wait is the feeling I am left with. Wow!
The title sets the stage for the imagery beautifully. The piece is concentrated—both intense and joyful.
Lovely! Carbonated joy … made me smile.