SHE AND I
Sitting by the stilled pond, I am startled
by the earnest green eyes gazing up through me
to the tall pine tree, imposing trustee
of my childhood home and innocence.
She is nine, has just learned how tender
her guileless heart toward a young kid in need,
the joy of its gamboled frolic at her
approach. She gazes skyward
never imagining herself salt-and-peppered,
awed still by the promise of nature
as in her youth. I quell an urge to touch her cheek,
the soft slope of its sadness dragging her down,
unnoticed, into ‘not good enough.’
For what, I want to ask? Good enough,
I want her to see, to have lived
sixty years more emerged
from invisibility into tangible life —
our three children — whom I suddenly wish
she could befriend. I raise my own eyes
to the trees ringing the pond
none a tall pine, but grand enough
to take me back to these roots,
my natural loves twined together
like our images on the pond’s surface.
sarahw
Not a letter, but true to the prompt in other respects. I wrote this poem years ago in response to a different-but-similar prompt and really like the way it turned out. And, right now, my eyes are burning from so much screen time that I’m needing a break.
I like your honest note at the end. I too am in the East Coast group and wanted to reach out.
My email is Laura_Daniels_117@hotmail.com is you would like to exchange poems and feedback beyond the marathon.
Meanwhile, the above poem – this makes me feel like I am traveling through time with you as you reflect by a childhood pond
Thank you, Laura. I’m curious how you found THIS poem to read, as it was posted during the 2019 Marathon …??? This has happened a couple of times but I never found out quite how.
In any case, glad you enjoyed it; and yes, I am East Coast and always up for additional poetic connection. Thanks for reaching out. My email is womenwritingvt@gmail.com. Though I am back in MA now. I gather you are in NJ?