Storm came with no warning
Thunder follows lightning flash
Water falling,
With thunderous sound
Rocks applauding
their dramatic performance.
Sky is ocean
Thunder crashing waves
As above , as below
Same to same
Sky just kissed the Earth
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Storm came with no warning
Thunder follows lightning flash
Water falling,
With thunderous sound
Rocks applauding
their dramatic performance.
Sky is ocean
Thunder crashing waves
As above , as below
Same to same
Sky just kissed the Earth
I like the action and sounds this poem bring to mind. Lightning and thunder flash and crash. Good work.
Thanks Joyce!. I love rain and it’s not happening here in Arizona lol. So was creating in mind with a action to wake me up at that hour 😉
I can feel and see the torrents of water pouring down in the kind of violent storms you get in your part of the world. When I lived in Seattle rainstorms like this were rare, even though it rained often it was prolonged and gentle. Good description that catches the emotions of not only the s torm but implies those of the person experiencing it.
Thanks Paul!. I love rain. We don’t get anything like that in Arizona. But India yes , during monsoon. I think I was really missing the rain and was falling bit tired during this hour of marathon so created action with rain and thunder:-). So glad it reached your heart too !
Beautiful
Thanks Vijaya 🤗