Here is the place in the in between
Where hardened trees guard the softness of hearts
Where moonlight traces a satin screen
And time casts its questioning shadow
Here is the place in the in between
Where feelings pause in the dew of dampened dreams
Where the past taps a desperate reminder it’s here
And what will be hovers in a hopeful haze
Here is the place in the in between
Where tepid souls breathe a placid peace
Where paths fuse in a canary coloured hue
And the guidance of grace is granted
Wow – amazing work and I love the alliteration and repetition of the first line!! So many beautiful phrases and I particularly love this one: Where feelings pause in the dew of dampened dreams…
I’m grateful for your kind feedback, thank you!
So happy you enjoyed it! Thanks a bunch!
Really love the imagery in all your sentences!
This is vivid.
Thanks,I appreciate that!
Thanks, glad you like it!
This piece is wonderful. The imagery the prose . Great job.
Many thanks!
Oh, the imagery here is so lovely. I think the word “graceful and lyrical” fills me when I read these words. Thak you.
Thank you for the kind feedback!
I love this poem — your vivid images are so engaging. And the poem’s use of repetition sets the gracefulness of this poem in motion, from the very beginning to the ending.