random conversations :
cultural, spiritual, artistic
words stacked
one
on
the
other
sounds bubble over
all play,together, in my mind
making me analyse and think,
making me hit replay.
they sink slowly
into the warmth of steam
dissolve in the void till
solemn silences subdue
difficult thoughts of loneliness
and pain
lost in the lather
of soap and a warm bath
The way you used spacing and alliteration helped give me that feeling of going from a busy mind to slowly melting into a hot bath. All the S words (sink, steam, slowly, etc.) sounded like the hiss of water into a tub, the sound of bubble bath foam. Thank you.
Thanks for such encouraging words. Really happy that you read and connected with it 🙂