Eyes
Smile
Beauty mark
All of your face
Flow
Fringe
Fabric
All of your style
Golden hair
Back dimples
Jewelry and tatoos
All of your body
Laugh
Words
Song
All of your voice
Wit
Heart
Passion
All of You
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Eyes
Smile
Beauty mark
All of your face
Flow
Fringe
Fabric
All of your style
Golden hair
Back dimples
Jewelry and tatoos
All of your body
Laugh
Words
Song
All of your voice
Wit
Heart
Passion
All of You
I like the concise form of this poem. Some of the words could be a little richer or more sensual to convey greater emotion, if that is what you want to do. It would give the overall poem a greater impact. Good job.