It’s almost over Just 2 more hours to go Sleep is calling me
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Hi Luv,
I did one of my poems as a haiku, too. They aren’t easy! 🙂 I have only one suggestion. Start with a stronger first word. “It” doesn’t give the reader an anchor. 🙂
Hi Luv,
I did one of my poems as a haiku, too. They aren’t easy! 🙂 I have only one suggestion. Start with a stronger first word. “It” doesn’t give the reader an anchor. 🙂