No need to hurry
no kids are home to slow us
the house is still full
of high temps and raised desires
sly smiles locked eyes still light out
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
No need to hurry
no kids are home to slow us
the house is still full
of high temps and raised desires
sly smiles locked eyes still light out
With few lines you certainly created a space and mood and a smile at the end.
Thank you
Thank you for checking it out. I was trying for a “tanka” but I’ve seen it called other things. Extended haiku. 5/7/5/7/7