Moin-moin
The thoughts of you and what you did to me
Leaves me with a bitter-sweet sensation.
Nobody knew you were in my pockets
Staining the insides
And burning my thigh.
I think your name is derived from the sound you make in the mouth.
I was just eating you moin moin moin
And about to take the fourth one
My teacher appeared.
I think primary four
And the wraps were four.
I quickly dunked you inside my shorts pocket
And so you ruined my entire day,
Moin – moin
I am confused by this. The poem is written in a mysterious way that leads the moment along nicely. But many of the lines are ungrounded, and have puzzling references that interrupt the reader’s thoughts. Like “I think primary four and the wraps were four.” You might need a little more explanation. 🙂