Warm milk
Almond cookies
A soft blanket
Falling rain
And the book you gave me
Perfect, right?
It would have been
If you were still here with me…
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Warm milk
Almond cookies
A soft blanket
Falling rain
And the book you gave me
Perfect, right?
It would have been
If you were still here with me…
Oh, this one strikes the reader in the heart with that last line. What a wonderful, compact emotionally raw poem. Thank you for sharing.
Love this! That last line….. powerful!
There is consistency in your writing that is “matter of fact,” and also first person that creates a space in which each reader can identify with.
We understand if we’ve ever experienced that Cookies those damn Almond cookies or in my world grapefruit slices sprinkled with sugar create the nostalgic scene every time
Sweetly brought out the one missing the most…touching