That cinnamon, autumn afternoon
Linda Ronstadt crooning “Blue Bayou” through the speakers of the stereo
You and I curled up under a beet-red blanket on the floor of your daddy’s carport
Cigarette smoke still lilting from the ash bucket twists around the naked lightbulb above our makeshift bed
You kiss me with the slightest tremor and I ask you what you’re thinking about
Somehow I don’t believe you when you tell me, “Do elk need jackets when out in the rain?”
But trust me, I understand, sometimes the words just get in the way
I kiss you back, light another cigarette, smile and say, “Goloshes, too!”
You did an amazing job using the prompts. I could see the reel in my head as your words came to life. Love it!