Just before bed
I listen to music
rocking back and forth
I daydream as I listen
my hopes and dreams
dance in the motion
the motions of my rocking chair.
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Just before bed
I listen to music
rocking back and forth
I daydream as I listen
my hopes and dreams
dance in the motion
the motions of my rocking chair.
Love that the rocking chair becomes the center of attention — visually seeing it as the foundation of the poem psrings motion and brings the poem to life. Great job!
I love how your personified your hopes and dreams which then dance in the motions-the motions of this rocking chair.