Riding Lessons
She came with a light girl, confidant girl, visitors
to our paddock. She did not want to touch me but
the girl rode round and round and I let
it seem she was in charge. Then Julie patted
my neck and the girl brushed me down
and my sawdust was soft and sweet.
When Julie came back alone her clothes
were from the gift shop, so stiff, so new.
Trainer McKenzie taught her tack
and how to sit; she barely breathed.
I felt her fear. Round and round
McKenzie lead us in the livery yard.
Her first dismount was luck; the second
was a fall. But week by week her muscles
grew. She learned to trust. I learned her voice,
her hands that stroked and drew my hair
in lines. We ride outside. I give her rein
these afternoons. She’s just about broken in.
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[prompt: Write a poem about an experience, but from the perspective of another.]
really like the alt POV … & love (😍) that twist in the tail last line. congrats 🙂