Moon above me so high,
Hear me speak, hear me cry!
The Universe shares it glory!
And I seek a happier story.
A canopy of flowers in my head,
As I softly lie in my bed,
I see myself at a peaceful lake…
A longing to reveal, a life to make!
Spare me pain and loss…
Wash my feet in cleansing moss.
Manifest my deepest yearning!
And keep my mind always learning.
I love how you describe the positive healing spirit in your poem, in every stanza. Beautiful!
Long time, and thank you so much!
Angela, I like the smooth flow and the rhythm. Lovely write 🙂
I agree that the words and feeling are bouyant and affirming.
I am looking at the rhythm of the lines and find they do not all match and flow equally
A canopy of flowers in my head,
As I softly lie in my bed, both are good but do not match. Perhaps I do not understand
Does this still get through?
Yes, still coming through.