Her soul is asleep at last,
light and dark are things of the past,
the moon is full and all is still
finally she has given up are will
to breathe to move to want
the mind is a terrible thing to haunt,
emptinessis suddenly here
There is nothing left to fear
By Aqua PMC
I REALLY like this. In darkness…
Awe glad, to hear, thank you. So, honored to hear these comments and in the future I need to get my writing and poetry out there.
This was a lovely poem. I liked how you put your lines together.
“Her soul asleep at last” Love this line, explains so well the need for inner peace.
Thank you so much. Honored.
Love this I resonate with this so much. Very good.
I appreciate your kind compliment! Nice to meet you, it brightens my day each time I receive a comment, and. I. Not used to my. Work being read by any one other than a best friend or teacher many years ago.