He came to town one Thursday
all dirty, wild and worn.
His steed was lithe and sturdy
His clothes were slightly torn.
People started whispering
as townsfolk often do:
Was this bloke a traveller?
or from that mining crew?
He settled in the local pub
and hogged the bloody fire
brooding over middies
until he’d then retire.
The local folk were edgy
at this silent, dusty stranger.
He seemed to carry with him
an air of sullen danger.
Just a few days later on
the whole town met to ponder
the man who’d built their township
and another one just yonder.
Old Man Age had taken him
a week or so before
and everyone who knew him
felt a sadness to the core.
So as the speeches ended
and the silence fell around
the Stranger put his hand up
and his voice he finally found:
“I’ve come to town to pay respects
to the man who gave me life.
I have no other siblings
nor a mother, nor a wife.
And now I have no father
with whom to reconcile.
Stubbornness and petty pride
made me a imbecile.
30 years ago we fought
and 30 years have fled
with not a word between us
and now, my father’s dead.
So take my words and listen
for I’m leaving town today:
Never let the curtain fall
on a half-arsed written play.”
This is beautiful. I loved the language and the rhythm . The feeling really hits you, of the man and his son. Thanks for sharing!
Wow, thank you very much for reading it and taking the time to comment! What a lovel surprise 🙂