(for hour 4—last-line prompt)
Cleansing Night
Amid the eruption of the righteous
and night-lighting fires,
their anger finally stokes to overboiling.
A brick crashes through the mechanic’s window
and the traitor is pulled to the street
to pay for his sins;
not only hiding some bigot’s car
but repairing it for the dirty-dollar bribe
to release the carbon-pouting menace
back on the world.
Some triggers cannot be borne.
No matter the perpetrator’s race or creed.
Tom’s shop will hide menace no more.
His magnanimous judges allow him to watch,
allow him to repent and offer alms,
and pray for calm when the morning comes.
“And pray for calm when the morning comes.” is the last line of Problems in Annady’s Core, book 3 of the Dragons in Space Series by Sandy Lender.
This poem has a wonderful rhythm and shape visually very striking and when spoken aloud the ebbs and flows of inflection and pace feel like waves upon an ocean.
A very powerful use of that final line and a great poem.
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Darren Syme Coremans (@dscoremans)
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Loved the rhythm… good one!