How long ago? It
seems like a different time.
My heart is beating.
Yet again the stillness comes.
Broken flowers rest on you.
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How long ago? It
seems like a different time.
My heart is beating.
Yet again the stillness comes.
Broken flowers rest on you.
I really would like to know your inspiration. Because like this makes me think of death but I am not sure if that’s what you’re goal is. It’s very beautiful either way.
You are right. Many years since my mom died, my dad last year. Thank you for your comment.
That last line sent me back to more than one burial site and that final goodbye.
To describe the flowers as broken and resting on “you” instead of a box or tomb
Created such a strong visual statement that pulls the audience through more than one space in that day
I’m emotional
Thank you for sharing
I am glad it touched you. thank you for commenting.