Prompt Eighteen – Write a poem about a moment of joy.
JOY
We had waited for this call for seven long years.
‘Hello,’ I answer, quivering with my fears.
‘We’ve found the perfect match,’ she said.
‘All sweet and pink, with a roundy round head.
But…’
Euphoric heart sinking, I whisper, thinking,
‘But?’
‘She’s polydactyl,’ said the voice.
I scream silently, losing all poise,
‘What does that even mean?’
The voice continues, gentle, unseen,
‘She was born with two left thumbs’
Wild relief, wild wild relief strikes me numb.
‘We could continue the search,’ I hear her say.
‘No,’ I shout, ‘we’ll be there today.’
‘We’ll be there in the next few hours
To see her, our baby, just ours.’
I sink to my knees to speak to the God above
‘Thank you, Thakur, for sending us a daughter to love.
I haven’t seen her yet, but I know she’s mine.’
And there was JOY in the moment, perfect, sublime.
The joy and momentary disappointment are palpable….as is the relief and the surety that this child is the one, no matter what is not perfect. Lovely moment captured.
This is such a great poem, you’ve really communicated emotions so well here, the confusion and the joy are both felt in equal measure. So wonderful.