The girl began to wake up, and lethargy set in as soon as she began to slowly open her eyes. She noticed a strange treeline out the cottage window, nothing that was familiar. The wall was decorated with a few beautiful masks hanging up evently spaced, and there was a cold bowl of porridge on the table.
Suddenly, the heat crept into her face and took over her whole body, she began to feel her heart zoom and race, and felt so faint she sat down quickly. Like a firefly trapped in a bottle, she began to panic and light up all of her thoughts as quickly as they came in. She began to place them in order of importance. How did I get here? Am I in danger, what should I do? Soon after, the door began to make the sound of a key and a rattle as it began to open. Her fate may very well be on the other side.
Wow. Nice work keeping all those words logically fitting into the story.
Thank you so much. Planned on using 5,then tried to use a few more words.
Very nice imagery and suspense at the end – to complete the poem as the reader wishes :).
Thank you so much!