In darkness when we met
You shine light upon my path
Now I watch dawn glow
See, I am my own light
I am sun, moon, stars
Plankton, planets, sun
I am the centre
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
GIS by day. Haiku writer. Yoga Teacher / Breath Coach. She/Her. 2023 is my third poetry marathon. I welcome any critiques on how to improve my poems. Many thanks! Happy writing to all :)
In darkness when we met
You shine light upon my path
Now I watch dawn glow
See, I am my own light
I am sun, moon, stars
Plankton, planets, sun
I am the centre
Bang, universe explodes
Time races, gas expands out to infinity
Who set that time bomb off
Did anyone mourn its passing
Ocean of souls exists
Outside of time and space
Do you ebb as the oceans do
Pulled by an invisible god moon
Expansion slows
Time stands still for an endless moment
Maybe then the universe can think
Will we be sucked in like breath before a sneeze
at every step
trust earth will rise to catch you
safely though you fall
Barranca
Meandering through eucalyptus trees
Underneath a waning moon
Scent of wet earth rising up
I fear the dawn may come too soon
River waters full wth rainfall
Fan out your lovely auburn hair
We float here, naming constellations
Breathing in warm scented air
Stars shine in your gentle eyes
Our fingers now entwine
Skin tingling when we touch
Your old soul merging with mine
The night we listened
To the oars rowing
Horn so near
It seemed
We could see our hearts
We heard the ocean
Full of warmth
We were perishing
Yet unheeding
In too great a hurry
I have since wondered
If we listen what
Might come to us
Out of the deep
Erasure of “Out of the Fog” by C.K. Ober
Meditation in taupe
Sand dunes undulate unto eternity
Under skies cerulean blue
Anxious thoughts fly countless loops
Touch and go on fertile earth
TIL fuel runs low
Breathe in peace
Watch them go
No more to be done
Dear Fiona at age twenty-one
Do not worry about what’s to be done
You are powerful now, you always will be
As long as you start loving me
Listen carefully to the truth in your heart
The decades to come will be the hard part
Although for now you believe their lies
One day you will learn how to rise
Your old soul has plans for you
When the moment arrives you will know what to do
Seek the messages that you send
From future you and your best friend
(Write a poem that contains at least five of the following words and possibly all ten.
Moonbeam Coffee Hush Fog Canteen Damn Concrete Fir Shelf Dock)
Perched on a moonmbean, sipping cold brewed coffee
In the hush of a London Fog, I lost you
Your canteen overflowing with damn sap instead of red wine
No concrete plans to use the fir liquor for anything useful
Meditating on the shelf life of dock spiders
When will this madness end?
Dig deep to where you feel
Pull out the words you find there
Comfort them as they bleed
Find freedom in truth
Peace in release
Love in your heart
Write to heal your soul
Ferns rise from ashes of a different time
Hard lessons here for those who saw
Oaks bear witness to those who suffered
Solace in the afterlife their due
Autumn leaves wept