Some days, I wish I could end my life.
Some days, I wish I were alive.
Some days I am just tired.
Today, I’m full of hope.
Tomorrow I’m off
To live a little;
To be happy.
Yeah, yeah.
Bye.
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
Some days, I wish I could end my life.
Some days, I wish I were alive.
Some days I am just tired.
Today, I’m full of hope.
Tomorrow I’m off
To live a little;
To be happy.
Yeah, yeah.
Bye.
Some days I feel the same!! Nice contrast between all the different feelings. I like the ending, you can read it several different ways.
Love your use of the nonet! You’ve used the simplicity of the form so powerfully. ANd the way you come from some days, today, tomorrow and then the huge embrace of the future in Tomorrow I’m off to loive a little. The contrast to : I wish I could end my life! Lovely.