A dirt road by the green fields
A lone car, traversing through puddles
The only remaining proof
Of last night’s shower
Apart from the vibrant green
Standing out even more in
The dreary weather…
It’s going to be a long drive home.
24 Poems ~ 24 Hours
A dirt road by the green fields
A lone car, traversing through puddles
The only remaining proof
Of last night’s shower
Apart from the vibrant green
Standing out even more in
The dreary weather…
It’s going to be a long drive home.
That type of long is definitely dreary.
I read this a few times. The last line caught me by surprise. I didn’t expect that ending. I’ll puzzle over this one for awhile
Thanks for the images!
Thank you for reading! ^^
There’s a nice contrast between vibrant green and dreary puddles. All bound with a yearning for home.
Reminded me of the novella “I’m Thinking of Ending Things”. Such fine imagery!