Hmmm…
~How do I feel?
Like a tiny, fluff
~feather~~~
~~~drifting in the wind…
How fragile and delicate
~complicated and free!
Beautiful.
~so very soft…
(((like a whisper)))
~drawn across a heated inferno~
of smouldering passion…
so easily~~~~~~~~~>
{{crushed}}
routinely, in fact.
~but today?
I…
Am…
Floating…
My eyes followed your words and could imagine a feather floating gentle. Both your choice of words and spacing allowed for this. Keep writing!
You really made my heart soar when you said to keep writing. 😀 Thank you so much for saying that. I’m a visual person so I’ve been playing around with words and spacing and symbols, seeing if I can get the words to look or sound or feel like the idea of the words using the words visually in different ways, if that makes sense. I’m excited the poem looked like a floating feather to you. *happysmile*