Severance in Cinquain – Hour 4 Posted on September 2, 2023 12:52pm EDT by brettdyer Hunger… Nourishment found, Her life’s sanguine essence, Accepted offer, tithe gifted, Teeth fed.
“teeth fed” – what a jarring and unexpected finale. Made me reread your poem. Leaves me in a lurch. Want to know more. Reply
“teeth fed” – what a jarring and unexpected finale. Made me reread your poem. Leaves me in a lurch. Want to know more.
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