prompt #1: after diana khoi Nguyen

the past draped about us like a cloak

 ~ after Diana Khoi Nguyen

the cloak of the past hangs so very heavy

hobbles my movement through the present

hides any futures

I shake my head to loosen its dark folds

but only flickers of light make it through

so much these days is dark

somewhere, light is its own mantle

this is the song I sing to myself: light hope

each another kind of cape

so that when this cloak threatens to smother

I stumble forward        hands outstretched

singing

2 thoughts on “prompt #1: after diana khoi Nguyen

  1. So inspiring! ‘somewhere, light is its own mantle,’ ‘light hope/each another kind of cape,’ ‘so that when this cloak threatens to smother/I stumble forward hands outstretched/singing’

    Britt, I am just blown away by each every poem here. Your pain, your grief, your heart are in every word and spill into me. I want to carry some of it with you. Perhaps by witnessing your words, that will happen. A bit.

    Thank you

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