Haiku on Tenderness Posted on June 26, 2022 6:24am EDTJune 26, 2022 12:42pm EDT by Cynthia Hernandez Such sweet tenderness you express in your kisses I’ve never known such bliss.
There’s something so great about how ‘bliss’ is so short, yet pulls the reader as much as the previous two rhymes. Lovely! Reply
Exquisite haiku! So much power in this tiny form, and the sibilants used so perfectly create a softness and sense of comfort in these lines – all leading up to that simple final word that means everything! Reply
There’s something so great about how ‘bliss’ is so short, yet pulls the reader as much as the previous two rhymes. Lovely!
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Exquisite haiku! So much power in this tiny form, and the sibilants used so perfectly create a softness and sense of comfort in these lines – all leading up to that simple final word that means everything!