I love this haiku! This reminds me of a friend that I have just spoken to…who coincidentally is habitually late and who I chide and say speaks in haiku because he is always on the run and trying to catch up! Great topic, theme and style. I like your word choice too…and I love the ending…” my soul is on time!’ Awesome!
I love this haiku! This reminds me of a friend that I have just spoken to…who coincidentally is habitually late and who I chide and say speaks in haiku because he is always on the run and trying to catch up! Great topic, theme and style. I like your word choice too…and I love the ending…” my soul is on time!’ Awesome!
Thank you for that! I appreciate the feedback. Working on keeping it real with both flesh and the universe.