From the feeder corn that made this all possible
The crops worth much less than the land
The beating heart of the nation
pumping syrup
through the veins of the tribes
Out of many one- you die with no heart
But life’s hard when you don’t got a brain.
Still, having no mind is a boon to your courage.
‘the beating heart of the nation /pumping syrup’ totally stopped me. Wow. Such a great image!
Nice imagery. I did get a bit stuck on the line “Out of many one- you die with no heart”. Perhaps it needs a comma after “man” or it needs “one-” to be deleted.