LAKES, RIVERS, SEA (rsponse to prompt 12)
“I am haunted by waters.” Olivia Laing, To The River
I have never trekked the Ouse, never
visited the riverside, Sussex home
of Virginia and Leonard, never felt
river and sea merging at Newhaven.
But I, too, have been haunted
by waters. Six weeks old, I was
packed up and stashed in a woven
basket; carried to Burt Lake.
The lake where I learned to fish –
perch, sunfish. Where I learned
to respect the power of water
(storms, shipwrecks, lost sailors),
learned to catch, skin, and fillet
fresh catch for supper. And to fear
the sturgeon swimming in deep waters
under our small aluminum boat
with its 5hp outboard motor.
Have spent years skating on frozen
rivers, startled by its deep cracking
like gunshot, and fish embedded
in ten-foot thick ice. Skated for miles
and hours, whisper singing, I wish
I had a river I could skate away on,
and almost succeeded, but the sharp cold
always brought me home,
I have moved inland and thirsted –
no sea, few lakes. But mountains
kept me company, their streams
babbling and gurgling
in tune with blood.
Book: To The River, Olivia Laing
First line: “I am haunted by waters.”
Last line: “We crossed the river then and pulled away, and in the empty fields the lark still spilled its praise.”
I loved the almost mythological strain in the poem !
Thanks so much for the insight and feedbck. I really appreciate it!
Wonderful lines:
“Skated for miles
and hours, whisper singing, I wish
I had a river I could skate away on,
and almost succeeded, but the sharp cold
always brought me home,”
And also how it moves through ideas, and weaves the story, and builds to the ending.
There’s so many brilliant lines here, but it’s the poem as a whole that shines in the way it transitions, shifts, and grows.
Love the notion of being ‘haunted by water.’ Great work!
Brilliant story-telling in your poem!
What a beautiful poem this was. The connection to water, the allusion to it being your lifeblood, gives added weight to the reference to Virginia and Leonard.