she speaks to me
simple words
nothing earth-shattering
and a fog of anger
detaches from my mind
releases its clutches
through no effort
of mine
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she speaks to me
simple words
nothing earth-shattering
and a fog of anger
detaches from my mind
releases its clutches
through no effort
of mine
This poem is very intriguing and thought-provoking. I love the way anger is portrayed in this poem — detaches, releases …. very visual and emotive. Nice work!
Thank you, Diane, for sharing your insight regarding my poem. Much appreciated.