I’m nearly weightless–
Floating, luxuriating
in a warm, dark bath.
Solitary, yet
at play, rolling and kicking,
even grabbing my toes.
Occasionally,
in the murky fog, taking
in fluid, hiccupping,
I’ve been very safe here
quite some time, and yet
my time has now come.
Suddenly, the walls
quake, and I start hurdling
down a narrow tunnel.
Oblivion, birth?
Yet I been thinking, feeling
a very long, long time.
Your poem made me feel the experience from the baby’s view – I like the line…
Suddenly, the walls
quake, and I start hurdling
I love how you put this turn into the poem…
It left me wanting to know more