The early morning fog
was like thin milk hanging over the cliffs
And the cold air
filled my lungs
like breathing
through a cloud.
I always liked the early morrning
stillness
like a gift
the world was giving
for the early birds
But that morning,
the quiet was interrupted by
the sound of deep breathing behind me
which awakened all every muscles in my body
and my skin tingled like it could hear
Fight or flight?
fight or flight?
I ran faster away from the sound
but saw the dark figure emerging from the fog
a creature so large
its breath filled my fear
with each breath.
Its beak looked large enough
to peck my eyes out
and though it was bigger than any bird
I’d ever seen in my life
we both stared at each other in relief
“Nevermore, Mr. Poe,”
I said
as I tipped my imaginary hat at him.
He just looked at me and laughed.
I really liked your beginning lines about how the fog was like thin milk. Awesome job!